Here are some of the fabulous stories that the children wrote about the experience. Their learning intention was to use adjectives in their writing.
Cross Country
by Taylor-Mio
On your marks, get set, go!
I ran and ran. I ran in the cross country. The ground was Mucky and wet and slippery. I was tired because it was a long race.
Cross Country
by Shenol
On your marks, get set, go! I ran fast and fast around the orange comes. Then the rain came down. The field was wet. the grass was slippery and I didn't give up. I tried my best.
Cross Country
by Ian
On your marks, get set, go!
We ran aroun the cones. The big and small cones are on the soggy field. The rain was so rainy!
Cross Country
by Ethan
Ready...Set...Go! I am having Cross Country with the children. When we got to the field I saw cones. They were the colour orange. Then the teacher at the starting line daid,
"On your marks, get set, go!" And we ran. After that I felt a raindrop. I ran slow so I don't trip over. It was rainy. We ran up the stairs. Then I ran past the road, past ocean wonderland, past a classroom, behind the classrooms, past the clock tower. Then I saw orange cones with white stripes on it. Then I ran past the road, back down the stairs , on the grass and past the starting line. I was hot and tired. The race was long and humongous and fantastic but Cross Country is cancelled for now.
I said, "Maybe we can do it tomorrow".
To my surprise, my mum and dad came running to me.
"Are you alright?" They said to me.
"I am alright," I said.
2 comments:
Te Ako Kowhai, I loved reading your recounts about Cross Country. You used some fabulous descriptive words.
Well done Ethan! I loved your story, it was very detailed. keep on running!
From te ako kahiketea Ella
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